12-01-2018, 08:53 PM
Application is bland and boring with little story about the character, and how they interact with the world. Also haven’t seen Dugmore in game so I can not vouch for this applicant in that regard.
Recommend going back and looking at previous Commando applications, then coming back and expanding on this application. Also recommend playing a bit more and getting your name known a bit more!
Going to give this a soft -1
https://projectunsc.org/forum/showthread.php?tid=841
https://projectunsc.org/forum/showthread.php?tid=834
These are some of the better applications out there, just thought they’d potentially help you if you wish to rewrite it! If you do rewrite the application I’ll consider removing my -1! Happy writing!
Recommend going back and looking at previous Commando applications, then coming back and expanding on this application. Also recommend playing a bit more and getting your name known a bit more!
Going to give this a soft -1
https://projectunsc.org/forum/showthread.php?tid=841
https://projectunsc.org/forum/showthread.php?tid=834
These are some of the better applications out there, just thought they’d potentially help you if you wish to rewrite it! If you do rewrite the application I’ll consider removing my -1! Happy writing!
