11-22-2019, 04:06 PM
So uh I don't really know who you are really, (I usually forget a lot of people or just not play with you), so I'm gonna write this just by reading your review. The first question about your character interacting with the world is answerd very blandly and no real time was even spent with it. It just shows a lack of effort and doesn't really talk about how your marine acts with others marines. The description of your character is the same, "The URF bombed the local city and ignited a burning hate in Donable". Okay, but why was hate ignited in him? Was someone close hurt to him or was the city he was in was so small that he experinced it himself. The only real thing mentionned about your character is what kind of weapon he likes
